I’m participating in a Boomer Blogging Extravaganza which will take place every Friday. It’s a way to bring attention to the new genre of books called Boomer Lit. Click here, Boomer Lit Friday to go to your one-stop shopping boomer lit blog which will feature snippets from a variety of boomer lit novels. It’a a good place to get a taste of what boomer authors are writing about.
Perigee Moon is the story of a man who has a life crisis, who comes to realize that he must be true to himself and makes the changes necessary to remove himself from a ruined marriage and the ”should do” world in order to have the lifestyle he craves.
This excerpt occurs after Luke has initially contacted Abby. It is the second time they’ve seen each other since the reunion. He finally made the call, and Abby invited him out to her house for a simple dinner. As he left, Luke asked Abby to go to a movie and dinner the following Saturday night.
They’ve just left the movie, Woody Allen’s Midnight in Paris, chosen for its PG rating. (Abby had told him she wasn’t ready to see an R-rated movie with him for which she made no apology.)
They decide on seafood for dinner. While they wait for a table, they sit at a wrought iron table outside with a glass of wine. Luke tells Abby he would like to help out in the garden, become her apprentice. She smiles at him when he says this, and tells him he can come as often as he likes.
“I used to have a garden,” he says. “But it was nothing like yours. Just a few things, some lettuce, tomatoes, summer squash. Easy to grow herbs. But since it’s just me now, I haven’t had one.”
“It’s become a big part of my life, growing, picking, canning, freezing,” she says. “By fall, I’m relieved to go indoors and relax for the winter, but in spring, I’m ready for the next season. The break is good. I feel renewed, ready to go again.”
“I’d like you to teach me,” he says.
“I’d be delighted.”
Author’s note: Of course. She’d be delighted. That’s what she’s thinking. The more she sees of him, the better she likes it.
Sounds like she’ll be in trouble soon…Well done, great excerpt!
Thanks, Claude!
Hmmmmmmm, and what else is she going to teach him????
It’s more like what he teaches her, but that comes a bit later.
The garden is a nice metaphor for their sprouting relationship. 🙂
NO pun intended, I’m sure!
Haha, there really wasn’t. But now that you mention it…
This is such a lovely scene. When I read PERIGEE MOON, I kept hoping Luke and Abby would get together somehow.
Old Luke wasted a lot of time. But in the end…
Crackling dialogue and the reader is right outside with them. Love this excerpt.
Thanks, Michael. I am about three days late getting over to the BLF site myself but plan to do it today!
I’m guessing he wants Abby to teach him more than gardening … Great dialogue.
Yeah, he does want more. It’s just an excuse! Thanks, D.R
I have a complaint, not with you, but with the Blog Hop format. I found this snippet engaging, interesting and professionally done,. but wished it were longer. But, that’s just me. Good writing.
Thanks, Klaw. Next time, I’ll make it longer.